Very entertaining! Reminiscent of Star Gate SG -1 television series. Military control of a portal between worlds. Great description and action. I wanted more and hope you continue this story.
Wow! Great world building! I could see, hear, and feel all if it👍👍 I felt a little sorry for Dino - maybe because I love T-Rex. Something about his vulnerability coming into our world made me a little sad. Great story. Part 2, please?!
Very entertaining! Reminiscent of Star Gate SG -1 television series. Military control of a portal between worlds. Great description and action. I wanted more and hope you continue this story.
Part 2 should post Tuesday.
Wow! Great world building! I could see, hear, and feel all if it👍👍 I felt a little sorry for Dino - maybe because I love T-Rex. Something about his vulnerability coming into our world made me a little sad. Great story. Part 2, please?!
There is a part 2, right? 😆
Working on it.
Cool. I really like your voice. Economy of style, direct language, dialogue that isn’t trying to be overly clever.