I'm just now catching up and I love the Flintstones references, it's a great little detail in a story with dinosaurs. The dialogue is great, too, very engaging!
The Flintstones references are so clever! Also now that we’re introduced to Nofha [sp?] I want to know more about her and her tribe. I can’t wait for Part 3👍👍
The Flintstones references add a bit of humor to your story. This a great setup, as someone who writes military political techno-thrillers, I’m expecting some serious fireworks in your next installment. Killing the lieutenant and Muñoz would be a great start, then the sergeants are left in charge.
Looking forward to where you take this story and I hope there’s lots more installments to come!
I'm just now catching up and I love the Flintstones references, it's a great little detail in a story with dinosaurs. The dialogue is great, too, very engaging!
The Flintstones references are so clever! Also now that we’re introduced to Nofha [sp?] I want to know more about her and her tribe. I can’t wait for Part 3👍👍
The Flintstones references add a bit of humor to your story. This a great setup, as someone who writes military political techno-thrillers, I’m expecting some serious fireworks in your next installment. Killing the lieutenant and Muñoz would be a great start, then the sergeants are left in charge.
Looking forward to where you take this story and I hope there’s lots more installments to come!